What type of music would you think of when the Lennex Forces begin their landing at Manehatten or the fighting at Canterlot?

After I don't know how many months, I have finally finished Trouble Begins and will now get back to it's sequel and all the other stories.

If anyone see's any mistakes, let me know on it. I did put in the AN on the last chapter that an author can't improve if he or she doesn't know what's wrong with the story or chapter. Most likely, no one will listen.

WHO WANTS BETS ON NO ONE WILL LISTEN? I CALL 500 BITS THAT PEOPLE WILL IGNORE IT!

I can't get this story completed until I get this last chapter edited. Can someone please help me out with it?

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Just place a comment on what needs to be fixed and I'll get to it.

Just need a few quick lookovers of this chapter before publishing. You can comment on the doc, or on this blog post.

Chapter 4

Working on the last chapter to Trouble Begins and would like some advice while working if possible.
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A New Ally

I am finally going to publish the first three chapters of a rewrite of a story I completely forgot about. I really hope this does better now.

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I have the first two done. I think two more to go.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2

Leave comments on how to improve on these chapters and for the next two.

I am working on the second chapter to Trouble Begins at this exact moment. It shouldn't be too much longer now.

Also, I start college again tomorrow, so I'm going to be very busy. I'll still be around to get notifications and all that, but I'll be busy with school so I won't be writing until I get some free time.

Finally got the first chapter to Trouble Begins rewritten

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I'm working on the first chapter to the rewrite of Trouble Begins.

Let's hope the newer version does better.

That's right, later on this week, I will be rewriting a story that has been on here since the 29th of December. The story itself is still up, but I took the chapter down. If anyone would like to help me rewrite it, let me know. I will be placing it into three and maybe four chapters.

It's time I really got into gear with these stories. I'm still taking a break from writing them for a few more days, but I want to make sure this one will be ready for it's rewrite.

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This story will be going under a major construction. I'm leaving it up, but it will have two or three more chapters, better detail, and more explanation. I hope the rewrite can save it.