Post-Fools 2016 · 4:43am Apr 2nd, 2016
That was fun, wasn't it?
Hey everyone!
As promised, I just uploaded the new version of chapter one for this story. It's much smoother, eliminates a lot of telly language, and I'm all together more proud of this version than the previous version. Especially when my editing runs only picked out two errors! (But of course there's bound to be more that I missed, right?)