Finally, the day has come! It only took, what 2.5 years or so?
In all seriousness, pretty happy. It's not perfect by any means, and I'm probably going to redo half of it in the future, but at least I have something out there. Criticism would be awesome! Lay it on me. If you hate it, tell me about! If you like it, tell me why! Every little bit helps me become a better writer.

Thanks!