As some of you may know I browse through TV Tropes somewhat regularly, leading to a substantial amount of intentional trope use and lampshading within both Then Tomorrow Came and Heart of Loyalty. I've been pretty interested to know which ones people have spotted (or even which ones they noticed that I wasn't even aware of). To this end, I finally stopped lurking, made an actual account, and started the bare bones of a page for Then Tomorrow Came

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So after a long LONG overdue polish and reformatting of Then Tomorrow Came, I decided to try resubmitting to Equestria Daily. I had attempted once long ago, but it kinda got lost in the system, and with the giant purge and strike forgiveness happening a while back, I figured I'd send it back in. Pre-reader got as far as chapter 4 before bouncing it back with the following feedback.

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So I finally went back through every chapter of Then Tomorrow Came and chopped all the walls of text into more bite sized paragraphs since I had no idea what I was doing when it came to formatting back then. I fixed the worst of Lavender Unicorn Syndrome (or in my case ____ Pegasus Syndrome). No changes to the plot. No significant changes that require you to reread it. Just a few edits to make things flow a little smoother and look a bit nicer.