Every once in awhile I come across a situation where I'm reading over a completed draft of a chapter only to realize that I may have gone to far in writing it based on requests for certain fetishes to be inserted into stories. My more recent story has this problem in chapter 2 and reading it again i9 realize it doesn't add anything to the story that i couldn't just gloss over in a later chapter (in this case being a dream). Chapter 2 adds nothing while chapter 3 adds some sorely needed humor.

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