Is this a good intro to ILOE?

I need some help for an intro to ILOE.

Which of these two would make a better one?

Imperial Liberation of Equestria's new chapter.
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Emperor Cunningham
General TK
Captain Yuri
General Stanley
The Pattens
General Baker
General Potter
Colonel Longbottom
Colonel Wilkes
Admiral Aang
Some random Imperial Soldiers
Or some Equestrian characters.

Who thinks an opening like this would be perfect for ILOE?

The next chapter to ILOE is almost ready. It's reached the 3,000 word mark, and the battle has just begun. I'll try to have close to 5,000 words if I can, but if not, between 4,000 and 5,000.

OK, who here is excited to see the conclusion to the Battle of Appleloosa? I'm going to make this fight go better, so hopefully you all will like it. But really, how many of you can't wait to see how the fight goes?

I'm staying everyone.

I'm going to just f the down button from now on. If they don't like it, let them. I have over 50 followers, and over twenty that do like my story.

I have just about had it. Every single time I try to get this story fixed, or even update it, I end up having 3 or more dislikes.

If this shit keeps up, I will be taking all my stories down, and stick with posting them on Fanfiction.net, as well as leave this site for good. I do not have time for this bull. At least on Fanfiction, there is no dislike button.

I will update this story one more time, and if I get a bunch of dislikes about this again, I AM LEAVING!

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For those that have read my newest chapter to Imperial Liberation of Equestria, what did you think.
For those that have not, here you go.
Let me know of anything that was wrong. And what you liked.

The next chapter is finally out.

Emperor Cunningham

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Out of the OC and crossover characters in Imperial Liberation of Equestria, which one is your favorite?
This is for those that have read it.

The main tune for each Imperial Army that's been seen so far.

The 1st Army

The 2nd Army

The 3rd Army

The Imperial 5th Army

Imperial Airborne

The Imperial Empire Marine Corps

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I hate having this. Can't think of what to do next. Really annoys me. Help please!

I don't care how much people don't like this story, I will finish it. Either on here or Fanfiction.net, this story will be completed. You all can put in Plan 9, I don't care. You all may not like it, but this story is not going down, or being cancelled!

For those that are following me, I need an idea for a character name. This character will be the leader of Celestia's Guard, and (not going to say anything since that would be a spoiler) He won't show up until after Appleloosa. If you have some names, let me know.

NO PMing the name please.

This story is getting a little too close for comfort. It still has quit a few chapters left, and I have no idea if it can hold on. If the next few chapters can't save it, I will be taking it down for major repairs and resubmit it when it is ready. I can give a small example to what will be planned in a future chapter.

Hope you like it.