I know this chapter is kinda short, I ended up breaking it into two chapters. Should have 31 out in the next week or so since it's mostly done.

Son of a bitch, this chapter is on the edge of being done but so help me God crap keeps popping up. Like last three days I have slept like crap. Just can't think straight long enough to finish off the chapter.

So chapter 30 has ended up being so long, I'm going to break it up into two chapters. I'll post chapter 30 in a few days, then wait a week before posting chapter 31 when it's ready.

Yes! Yes! *Rolls around on floor hugging story* Chapter 30 is turning out so well! There's so much deliciousness in here! My brain is just cranking stuff out!

Chapters 11 through 13 done today, whew! Looking good so far! Not as many mistakes so it's kinda fun to see how my writing slowly evolved.

I'm up to chapter 10 as far as the editing process goes. Added in some extra backstory and whatnot. Noticed there were some poorly described parts of the castle. That's what I get for not being thorough.

Just a...few more...words...

When I said later next week, I meant tomorrow night after my prereaders get done with it.

I think I might actually get this chapter out within the next week or so. Shit has kind of stopped for now and I can feel myself wanting to write it again. If crap hits the fan again soon, I'll just post up the first half as it's own chapter and post the second half when I finish it since the entire chapter is longer than normal. Thanks for being patient!

Got most of it written, just gotta connect some scenes and spruce up the details. Thanks for being patient with me. I've had some life crap come up that sorta drained my ability to write ANYTHING.

AS I'm going back through, there's several things I never talked about that I've decided to improve.
#1 In chapter three, the princesses never react to seeing Taraska. It's mostly ruins. Houses are burnt down, there's debris everywhere. And they never react to it. Originally i thought it was assumed they pretended not to care as to not embarrass the Taraskans, but this seems a bit...odd. So I'm adding in a few paragraphs where they comment on it.

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It's been edited, improved, spellchecked, all of it. done done done done. Never touching it again.
Now the same with chapter 2, 3 and 4

I'm in the process of editing chapters 1-28. Yeah there's some typos I missed, and some descriptions I can improve/make more clear. Please be patient with me hehe.

Tenacious Lotus
She has two chapters of her excellent story published right now. It's very deep and emotional, just the kind of stories I like!
I Am The Tantibus

Done with the next chapter, gonna toss it up this evening!

Decided to start writing King of the Dead: One Woman Army, the prequel to KOTD.
It's how Lucretia went from being a disabled girl to one of the most reknown captains in the Taraskan army. Anyone know of some good groups who want a strong female character without the stereotypes?

Writing the next chapter and taking minor breaks to edit previous chapters. I'm up to chapter 24 so far. *pant pant*

Ya, it's done. Something feels of about it though. I'm sitting here editing the crap out of it and no matter what it just feels off. I'll toss it up soon, just wanna make it perfect since you've all been so patient.

Play
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a-7MKTjzW_I&index=1&list=PLd5T9UjUUPfO5f9vlRQB8u-l5TU2xx4Qn
and
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nDq6TstdEi8
together. Best fighting music ever.
Getting to work on the next chapter, may have it done within the next few days.