Well, here it is. Don't even have to go to the doc.

Anything wrong, let me know and I'll see what I can do. If you say something is wrong, I may or may not change it. Certain things are not being changed.

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I'm going to be creating what would be known as the Ponyville Army but need some ideas for the names.

Idea is that these soldiers are from Cloudsdale, Ponyville, Appleloosa, and a few other minor areas.
examples I mean by names are like 3rd Sharp Brigade.

Any other name ideas?

also, today I'll be working on chap 1 even more and will place a blog when I think it's ready to view before replacing the old one.

Need a design for Tirek's flag.

Still going back through ILOE and redoing it bit by bit. Taking a while, but I'll be done by the end of the month on chapter one, hopefully.

The Honeymoon story is getting closer to have Chap 1 done.

Also, don't think I've abandoned everything. I'm still working on them, just need some time.

ILOE is taking a while to redo, but I plan on finishing it sometime soon.

wedding story at the moment

for those with OC's, not appearing just yet. I'll see if I can make it a long one-shot.

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I'll be doing an intro like this one soon. Just have to draw better.

Unless some of you might have a better idea for it.

one key thing for this rewrite is fleshing out the characters.
Let's start with the top Imperials.
The Emperor, TK, Aang, General Potter, Colonel Longbottom, and Captain Yuri.
TK, Aang, Potter, and Longbottom are ones we already know.

The Emperor. How can we flesh him out. One person mentioned he seemed to be too casual. How can we make him seem less casual?

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rewrite is coming along, but very slow.

I'll be there working the best I can. Have to go to work for three hours

what your least favorite thing is about ILOE. Working on redoing a few things, so any tips would help.
Focus, you keep quiet about the new ideas. Can't spoil it.

Infantry fights, tanks supporting infantry, cav battles, and an air fight.
What we have coming up
Cloudsdale-Urban warfare, air battle, infantry fight, tanks supporting infantry, tank battle.
Crystal Empire-Infantry and tanks working together to capture areas. Infantry arriving by train when a battle is going on.
The Badlands-Infantry fight mostly.
Canterlot-Big time Urban Warfare.
Extra- Combination of different.

please give some suggestions
comments only

I'm working hard on this rewrite and would like some tips while doing so.

chapter.
I'm there making any changes I see fit. Let me know if there are any suggestions you have.

One who sits on a throne and has others do their bidding?
One's like Alexander that would be at the front with their men?
Or makes the plans and only leads a Reserve group?

While many have already seen him, what do you all think he should be?
Not changing what he is.
To know, you have to read.

Imperial Emperor as a Naruto Character.

for those that have read ILOE, what is your favorite part? Least favorite? What can be improved and what is good?

I remember when ILOE had only 31 or so likes to 18 dislikes.
For some reason, the dislikes are disappearing and likes are appearing.
While I'm not complaining, what is going on?

I'll leave the first chapter here.
comments

However, I will not take all suggestions. Feel free to comment

I'm offering four sneak peaks to an upcoming chapter after the Canterlot battle is done.
Well, first I have to get through Cloudsdale, Badlands, Crystal Empire, and a Lennex Counterattack on Ponyville, but this will be maybe the chapter right after Canterlot or the second after.
I'm only offering four.
And Follow, you're already one, which is why I didn't say five.
First come, first serve.

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