New MLP: Corrupted Chapter! · 4:23pm May 29th, 2023
After over two weeks, the brawl with Twilight is finally available to read!
It’s the longest chapter yet and may or may not be a game-changer.
After over two weeks, the brawl with Twilight is finally available to read!
It’s the longest chapter yet and may or may not be a game-changer.
Hey guys! Sorry it’s taking longer than usual for this next chapter. It’s luckily finished, but I’m waiting for it to be proofread before finally publishing it. It’s a little more important to me than usual that I get it right.
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I haven't done this often (or maybe I have), but is anyone willing to proofread the upcoming chapter of MLP: Corrupted?
It's a little more important to me that I get it right, especially since it's a major chapter of the story.
If you're interested, then please let me know. Thank you.
((If I were you, I’d put this message in front of a mirror.)
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̵.̶ɿ̸ɘ̵ʞ̵ɒ̷ɘ̶w̴ ̵ƨ̷Ɉ̷ɘ̶ϱ̸ ̸l̵l̶i̶w̸ ̷ɿ̶υ̵o̷γ̴ ̷ƨ̴ɒ̷ ̵ɿ̶ɘ̷ϱ̶n̷o̸ɿ̷Ɉ̴ƨ̵ ̸ƨ̸Ɉ̷ɘ̷ϱ̶ ̷Ɉ̸I̴
-Chapters 20 and 21 are going to have brutal moments. And depending on where things go, there may be a small moment that would border gore if I described it, though I won’t describe it enough to where I need a tag.
-I altered a small previous thing from a previous chapter. Remember when I said Pinkie broke her foreleg? Yeah, she only sprained it now. (This is important to note)
-Twilight’s not the finale. But we are in the final chunk of the story.
Hasn’t been too long since the last chapter but I’m pretty much posting this to see if y’all think it’s written well so far.
Twilight’s head cocked to the side, and her singular, bright magenta pupil shifted glances between all five survivors. Then, her sinister gaze shifted to the diamond, and her head tilted to the other side.
Realization struck Starlight and Chrysalis, and the former quickly grabbed the diamond and held it close.
The story did not get updated, guys!
After I draw Corrupted Bright Mac (considering I drew Pear Butter, he has to be next), who would you want to see the most?
Current options are:
-Starlight (normal or corrupted)
-Fluttershy (normal or corrupted)
-Diamond Tiara
-Corrupted Spoiled Rich
-Corrupted Cozy Glow
-Corrupted Sunny Starscout
There are plenty more but these are the options for now.
MLP: Corrupted finally got updated! Have fun with what I’ve got in store ^^
-MLP G5
-Bluey
-Spongebob
-Robot Chicken
-Bobs Burgers
-South Park
-Futurama
-Teen Titans (and Teen Titans Go)
((I know there are folks that are fine with waiting but I might start posting these when chapters take too long. I’d like to keep the train going.))
If… if Chrysalis were to get fully corrupted, she would be tied with Twilight as the second most powerful corrupted character.
So just like with Pinkie, Chrysalis’ corruption is also an incredible must-avoid.
(Nothing is being confirmed for what happens, I’m just getting that fact out there)
Choose one character you haven’t seen that you would like to see as a survivor, and/or choose one that you would like to see corrupted.
…̸A̴n̸d̸ ̶i̴t̷’̴s̶ ̴g̷e̸t̵t̵i̶n̸g̵ ̷h̷a̴r̴d̸e̸r̶ ̵t̷o̵ ̸c̴o̵n̵t̵r̵o̵l̸…̴ ̸b̷u̸t̴ ̶I̵ ̵m̸u̸s̷t̵ ̵k̵e̴e̴p̸ ̵f̶i̴g̷h̴t̶i̵n̸g̵.̸
T̵h̷e̵y̵ ̶d̷o̴n̶’̴t̵ ̶k̷n̵o̶w̵ ̶t̸h̸a̶t̸ ̸I̸ ̵h̴a̶ve broken free…
(No image this time, this is as spoiler-y as I’m getting
Anyways, new chapter tomorrow, finally! Won’t be going easy this time)
Throughout the events of the story, Corrupted Twilight’s visited multiple other worlds related and eventually unrelated to MLP as a whole. One of them being Bluey’s for example. It won’t be explored but it’s a fact I will confirm.
(I don’t watch Bluey but I know it’s been getting older fans like MLP has)