Having some trouble thinking of how to continue
need ideas to continue Twilight's argument with the Imperial Officers

As the allied column continued it’s march back, the atmosphere was uneasy. The feeling of betrayal could be felt from Luna and her guard when they saw their allies protect Blueblood. However she felt, Luna agreed to keep quiet, hoping to know what they learned when the time was right. She never liked being in the dark and this time was no exception.

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Well, since 23 is the Lennex counterattack on Ponyville, 25 will be Twilight getting a new Castle
Chapter 24 will have the Grand Galloping Gala so you can imagine how that will turn out.

Twilight arguing with Imperial Commanders and Officers about how to fight.
Twilight wants everyone to stay together while the Imperials are planning on dividing their forces to fight the enemy on multiple fronts as to keep many of them bogged down.

Is there anything wrong with this type of disagreement?

Twilight- Equestrian style of fighting
Imperials- Each commander has his/her own style but do prefer to split up and fight

Each faction involved fights their own way.

Imperials- usual formation of lines of infantry fighting their opponents. Uses tanks from time to time (mostly for urban warfare or when attack strong defensive lines), Will send forces into different directions if needed to fight their enemy.
Lennex- Just about the same as Imperials but uses massive numbers to achieve their objective.

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should I just upload 7-11 like I originally planned or just release all of the chapters from this blog when the last one is done?
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Going to be a lot. I could just write them up, edit them, and publish them all when the last of them are up, or just stick with the original plan of 7-11 and go one at a time from there.

What do you think?

I made one for the Imperials (going to give an explanation as to why they call themselves that in chapter 7 of ILOE) so now it's time to give info on their enemy, The Lennex Empire

Form of Government- Massive Dictatorship. Emperor rules with absolute authority with no Senate
Lennex soldiers are mostly clones of their leader or robots. Warships are based of the Mary Rose design
Planes are WW1 or CIS starfighters from Star Wars (those won't appear in ILOE)

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here's Chap 7 of ILOE until you get to the old writing.

As the allied column continued it’s march back, the atmosphere was uneasy. The feeling of betrayal could be felt from Luna and her guard when they saw their allies protect Blueblood. However she felt, Luna agreed to keep quiet, hoping to know what they learned when the time was right. She never liked being in the dark and this time was no exception.

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Just a little slow at the moment. Got Zecora done so she's out of the way. Just have to find ways to get it close to at least 3,000 words. Man this is harder than I thought.

Good news, Sparkle Family Reunion this chapter.

7-10 are still under a major rewrite. Won't bring them back until Cloudsdale Part 1 is finished up and then, you'll get five new chapters instead of one.

I'll let you take a guess on who it is.

here's a hint. It's a character that's hard to write

While working on the rewrite for Chapter seven, I'll also be going ahead and writing Cloudsdale, Crystal Empire, Badlands, and Canterlot, as well as a special surprise.

However, I'll reveal the planes the Pegasus Squadron for the Wonderbolts.
Calm

Playbitz

Swift

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I did one before from the view of the cockpit. Did it by hand so I'll see if I can do another one. I'll just take a picture and maybe send it to DeviantArt and get it scanned and finish it up on paint as to get the feel of it. No, it's not going to be the best, but I might be able to do something. at least you can see what part of the fighting in Cloudsdale will be like in it. Might add a member of the Wonderbolt Pegasus Squadron.

Start drawing your planes cause after I get chapter seven's rewrite done, I will go right through Appleloosa's. Start drawing your planes cause you'll need them.

Planes can be either Bi or Tri planes.

Go any color, any decal, and pattern you want.

Calm, let the others know.

Remember, this story is humanized, so how would you imagine that battle?

Yeah the last one was over 5,000 but do I really need to bore everyone with every single detail?

Maybe around 3,000 or 4,000 but do you all want over 5,000?

Since the last chapter was over 5,000 words, should the next one also be that long or longer?
All that they're doing is returning, explaining, and planning for their next move against the Lennex Empire.

How could I make it just as long as the last chapter.

This is what the total words for ILOE by Fimfiction

When typing into calculator, total is 27,146.

What is going on?

and placed. This chapter is the longest of the rewrites with over 5,000 words.

Just have to get it edited. Took quite a few days to get the rewrite finished.