Chapter one has been edited and (hopefully) rid of it's mistakes from the old one. Thanks to Accordant Author and DemonBrightSpirit for really helping me out with the story. If it weren't for them, I would have never been close to being finished. Now news about the other chapters is they are currently in getting worked on so that might take a while.

Sorry.

So I hope you're scared excited as I am!

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First of I got the old chapters back thanks to More Dakka. Okay so I did made some noticeable and unknown noticeable changes to the first two chapters. Everything happens slightly different, but all the same. I got a good feeling about this one and I actually am happy with this one.

"But Senpai you said that three times before and you ended up rewriting the story again! I doo not believe you!" :( shouted.

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I kinda messed up the other a kind user gave me.

I didn't want to make a blog like this, but I feel as though as my readers you should know. I have been running around in circles with ideas for HS. So much that I just write it out and claim it as the new prologue, but then I get another idea. When that happens I see the first ideas as not good enough and write the new idea.

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Be happy if I told you the revised chapter one and two is finished with the third one in progress?

So I recently finished rewriting Higher Senses first chapter and boy was it tough. I won't get into any details about it, but hopefully it turns out better than the original. Another thing, the direction I'm taking this story is undecided truth be told, but there are so many ideas I would love to finally be seen and having the story the way it is now won't help make that happen.

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I was going to post a joke chapter out with Scootaloo dressed as bat mare and scare a lot of ponies with it, but that would be a major slap in the face to you all. No instead I'm going to try to push out the chapters.

I always wondered how to other authors on here to update fast and have this stuff edited. I feel like I'm becoming slower and slower with updates.

What am I doing wrong?

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What the title says.

I need prereaders, editors, whatever! Just don't want that same mistake what happened to the other story happen to Higher Senses. Now of course I made some changes to the original, you will notice them of course, but it's not too far from the original I at least made sure.

I realized there's going to be some readers who don't like what I've done and I honestly can say is, sorry, but this is my story and I'm writing it how I want.

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Who has the previous chapters saved before the all rewrites please let me know so I can respost them and continue from there.

I don't know. For some reason I can't help to think if I've written Higher Senses in first person it would be better. Like I just can't help to feel third person might not be my strong suit.

I listed the things I could do in first person I cannot do in third.

More of her thoughts.

unreliable narrator because she's a kid.

More insight on what she feels about the change and what she believes others think about it.

Sudden surprises due to (number two being the cause)

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I'm been thinking this, but was too afraid of what the answer. Now it's time to grow a pair and ask. Do you like the current chapters of Higher Senses? If so what you like about them? What you hate? What you think the story needs to be better in the future? I would love to hear some cause I'm thinking about keeping what how it already is.

I will not update Higher Senses until I have reached at least seven chapters. So I need at least.....six prereaders? Or four, whatever amount is best so I can make sure the chapters are nice and pretty when I post it so whoever (no one:( )is free please will you help me on this journey.

To those people waiting for updates:

My new year s resolutions: update more.

Merry Christmas to you all and I hope you have a wonderful time with your families! Now, I been noticing authors are updating their stories as a present to their fans before they enjoy themselves so I thought.

WHY NOT UPDATE HIGHER SENSES.

Two chapters. Just gotta talk with me editors and proofreaders then it shall be ready!

url=https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/419202/im-sorry]blog explaining my intentions for the story.Probably too mad by me doing this or just done with bothering to comment your opinions. I like to hear them, even though it might be crude or just brutal honesty.

God I love using this gif

Anyway, I got some good news and I got some bad news. The good news is I got four new chapters ready to be edited and posted for your enjoyment, the bad news is well....the brand new chapters are *sigh* another revision.

*Crowd starts booing and throwing popcorn at author*

Now I know you're mad and---hey watch that popcorn!

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Already?

Wow.

Time passes.

In a couple days. It's

Higher Senses birthday!

That's right. The first story I got in the featured box.

Ah those were the days. Kids grow up so fast. :'(
What's the progress on the story?

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