I like flashy headliners. But this one actually makes sense. I was finishing out the minor grammatical edits I mentioned I noticed. Everything is up to date. Today I edited 4-13. I split two chapters up into smaller bits. This will make it easier to read.

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Okay, so I said a week or so back that I noticed some errors when I went to reference a chapter already published here. I just finished a revised edit on Chapter 2 and Chapter 3. Only a few minor tweaks as expected! I did publish new chapters just to keep track of which ones I double checked again so I could use the published dates to keep track! Old ones were deleted.

Now just 4-11 to double check!

I finally got to what ended up being Chapter 65! And that means, after years of planning, I hit the chapter I have been waiting for. The first climax of the book, or books. The story as a whole~!

In celebration, I am released Chapter 14 ahead of schedule~!

I will be releasing some of the part names of Book 2 over the next week. So far, book 1 is:

BOOK 1: TRAINING
PART 1: Loyalty 1-5
PART 2: Duty 6-9
PART 3: Honor 10-15
PART 4: Commitment 16-26

BOOK 2: THE MISSION
PART 1: Rosemary 27-33

More to be released as soon as I finished some segments up!

I have spent the last few days working through the Children of Balefire. An adaption of the Children of Atom to the Fallout Equestria universe. A beautiful tale was spun. Y'all will have to wait for Chapter 60. Sorry. But I would not wait for it to be released. Keep up on the reading so you don't get behind!

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I am happy to state that this week, I will be releasing Chapter 13. Most importantly I am writing for Chapter 59. I am well ahead, given plenty of time. Even to edit properly so you get the best story.

I am also currently editing the first 12 Chapters after I discovered and error or two. Chapter one has been edited again and posted. Little changed in the chapter.

I am happy to say that I finally went back in an edited Chapter 1. The edited version is the only one available to read. I am appalled that after a dozen edits, I had some of the mistakes I found. But such is writing. If you don't write, then you don't get how it all becomes a wall of words that blend together.

Enough Rambling. Content is the same, I just fixed some unfinished sentences, flopped words, etc.

Chapter 50 took an unexpected turn and I am expanding the time of some secondary characters. Since its a jump ahead, its protected by the spoiler filter. Enjoy.

“I am not with herm!” Deke and Little declared together, facing each each.
“I haven’t even know the brat a week!” Little said recovering first.
“What she said!” Deke shot back. “Wait! Brat! I am not a brat!”
“You act like one,” Little said glaring at Deke.

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Well, after needing to reference an earlier chapters, I found myself in another edit of chapters 12+ that had already been cleared. I will be making a sweep through the published chapters shortly and make sure any mistakes are fixed. Sorry for any inconveniences.

A lot of information has been added to the Story's wiki page.

I am a sucker for Tuesday releases. No idea why Tuesday, but I guess I just love Tuesdays! Anyway, if I release a chapter, it will be on a Tuesday, baring a special release.

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