It’s kinda crazy/weird/creepy to see the characters pre-war. I mean, take this scene:

Luna walked through the hallways with Silverfang behind her. Silverfang looked around, eyeing the statues, paintings, windows, and, most importantly, the guards. Silverfang loved the Royal Guards. Whenever she’d had the chance to talk about them, she’d take it. She’d read about everything there ever was about them. Who formed them, their history, which battles they’d won and lost.

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So far, only thing Granite’s done is this:

The changelings nodded slightly. Granite looked over at Kater. “Kater, put that book down. Twenty laps around the hive. Now.”

Kater side, dropping her book and editing the room. Kater was never really his favorite. Although, none of the squad held any rewards either. Granite looked back at them. “You know what, how about you maggots join her.”

It wasn’t a question.

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Luna watched as Silverfang practically ripped through the fruits she gave her. Luna was impressed. The poor batpony either was really conservative with her food, or just extremely willful.

Silverfang then picked up a watermelon. A whole watermelon. Practically gone before Luna could even blink. And don’t even get Luna started on the water. Silverfang could’ve practically drunk the oceans dry.

“So… art thou satisfied?” Luna asked sarcastically, a smirk on her face.

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This took so fucking long…

“...Can you die a second time?”

Chrysalis watched the changeling load the small, hoof-held cannon. She smirked. No way the ponies could—

Boom!

“Oh fuck, my hooves!”

Foresight stared, not really knowing what to say.

“Uh... we should probably put less gunpowder in, eh Foresight?” Chrysalis said, nervously nudging the changeling.

Foresight fainted.

If anyone has any ideas for what they want to see in this story, I’m open for those. But no shipping! Not yet.

Anything else, that’s okay.

Go read it now!

Please

How violent can this story get? I mean, it’s Teen rated... so how violent is too violent? Like... can I have a scene with someone tangled in barbed wire or not? How detailed can it be?

Is child murder too dark? Is burning a village crossing the line?

I don’t get it

My brain hurts

There’s gonna be a chapter for that. Why must Iron Maiden be so catchy and give me obvious ideas?

I’m this close to adding a few (non-explicit) sex scenes in. It’s not gonna be the main focus, but I’m close to doing it.

And probably a rape scene because I am horrible

Chrysalis sat on her throne, watching as several changelings soldiers, the Devil Horns, trotted past her. They soon stood at attention in front of her throne, their faces wearing stone cold expressions. She chuckled. “You boys put on one hell of an act!” she called.

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The war lasted four years

The only battles I have are in Forevers Fields (the land Ponyville stands on), the Frozen North, Saddle Arabia, Western Equestria (the large area where the rock farm is), the changelings final stand under Cloudsdale, Fort Hyaline, and some naval battles.

I have to stretch that to four years.

Uh...

Anyone have any area ideas? (This is pre-Luna banishment btw, so no Ponyville)

Chrysalis uses a drug to make parasprites carnivorous and unleashes it on a trench of ponies.

CitreneSkys did their own take on the C-P War art.

Non-Gore Ver.

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Didn’t expect this get “popular” that fast.

Anyway, my idea is to have four stories in the series, since the war lasted four years. So, one story per year.