So after reading the comments for Chapter 19, I decided to do some minor rewriting of it. Namely the final scene. Hopefully now it doesn't make Aurick look like as much of an idiot for not capturing Inkheart when he had the chance.

In chapter 4, where the princesses talk about Inkheart. I made the mistake of having Luna state that she will personally take care of the situation. That directly contradicts her future actions and reasons for not doing so. I have amended the chapter so that this doesn't happen, and it is firmly upon the guards to handle this.

Apparently I snuck my way into the featured box. I don't know how this happened. I guess all I can say right now is thank you for reading my story. I've got plenty of content coming in the future.

So despite my best attempts, my rewriting of Enchanted has hit a wall. I'm trying to fix the pacing issues that are prevalent throughout the story, but I've found it do far more difficult than I thought it would be. I can't bring myself to feel excited about it, and I find myself forcing myself to write it. I'm going to take a break and try writing something completely different before attempting to return to this.

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