Chapter twelve is done! · 6:44pm Aug 31st, 2014
Just need to send it to my editors and beta readers!
Also, I've gone and made it even harder for me to write.
Just need to send it to my editors and beta readers!
Also, I've gone and made it even harder for me to write.
But...... I feel like writing Survival more.
Opinions?
I would say 95% done?
Expect something within the week.
BOOOOOOOOYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
Expect great chaos as I try to write the next chapters of Two Moons
But 100 watchers, woooooooooooooooooooooooooooot!
I just posted Chapter 11s and a revision of Chapter 1.
Enjoooooooy and be sure to thank my wonderful team!
I FINALY fucking got that damn achievement for Crusader Kings 2. Only 0.3 percent of the people who play the game have it and now I am part of that group!
And Chapter 11 is done, I just need to get feedback from Ninja and Lord Artemis .
IT IS DONE! Now I will send it off to my team and you will have an update.
And then things will truly get interesting in chapter twelve.
In the past, Lord Artemis and I have talked, as our stories do run along similar paths. And just last night, he offered his services to become either my third editor or my second beta reader. As I have two editors already, he has joined the ranks of Ninja. Make sure to give him a big hello and swing by his page to check out his work.
I would like to say it is around 58% done? It is close, I need to work a bit more on Luna's side to get it to the right point before I can finish off Arty's. From there, I can finally send it off to my editors and then beta reader before posting it. It should be done by Tuesday the latest, but I don't know when you will be getting it though.
First off, I want to thank everyone that gave me those kind words of encouragement. To all my readers and friends, thank you from the bottom of my heart. Secondly, I will do some rewriting to the beginning, to make a better segue into the story. I will not, however, be taking out the vague references to the genders in the beginning as it helps build the mood. And once I do get a chance, I will be resubmitting it in.
Rejecting A Chance Meeting of Two Moons
Read: 1/2 of the first chapter.
This story is in dire need to be proofread:
All things considered, the alicorn of the sun could have done this a bit better.
Lavender Unicorn Syndrome is (ab)used to the level of distraction.
From the very beginning, we can find emphasis on strange things:
Blaming Arty for getting mad about constantly painted as Nightterror Knight when he was trying to step
4, 440.
And it is still not done!
As I am typing this, Artemis Chapter is 98% done but fuck it, I will finish it off tomorrow!
The artist, http://jaquelindreamz.deviantart.com/ , has expressed her approval and even told me she has read my story and enjoyed it!
Woot!
I just added in the last tag for the story along with chapter ten, the gore tag.
I would say it is about 25% done or so,.
Does anyone care about my progress updates?
Well, I will want to say it is done and all written out.
So I will! Both chapters are written up, just going over it with Foals Errand, and then it will be sent off to my crack team of editors.
I will also try to get back to writing longer chapters again.
Artemis's side is done with, just finished it off. Going to start and work on Luna's right after this blog.
This second part is something I am thinking of just now.
I will not mention names, as it is both a petty thing to do and the whole matter is resolved so there is no need to drag up stuff by saying who it was, but someone complained about the lack of funnies in one of the set of the chapters.
I will be taking out random from Two Moons. In it's place, I will be putting dark.
Yes, things will become pretty dark but not for a while.
Don't worry, I will tell you exactly when things will get dark and you will have a choice to stop reading at that point to avoid it.
GO FORTH AND READ IT!