No More Harmony: Desperate Struggle, another "masterpiece" by that autistic 13 year old derpybuckingsucks23, she's probably a troll considering her name, but her reaction is funny all the same.

Plan of attack:
Dislike fic, and the first one there can choose a topic to discuss after making constructive criticism on the fic. By which I mean comment on grammar/ poor characterization and retarded story-line.
It'd also be great if you could comment of the shortness of her stories, considering for her a 1000 words is an epic.

Edit:
LINK:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/15890/No-More-Harmony%3A-Desperate-Struggle

Ahhh
Dis gon be good!
I couldnt be in the first one though >.<
School, go figure
Is it up yet?

Oh shite! I forgot to post the link, wtf is wrong with me!

Link:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/15890/No-More-Harmony%3A-Desperate-Struggle