Hello I recently made a human in Equestria story were the human is projecting with his mind and ends up having to go to Equestria to stop himself from being pulled into the afterlife. There he finds himself in the womb and is soon born.

I am asking if this has been done before where a human is literally born as a pony inorder to come to Equestria.

Also I would like to know if you think it is well written and if I have made a good story besides that opening.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/79479/mordane-stronghoof

I have been told it is a good read before though I would like to hear from people who did not like it after seriously giving it a chance.