I did my best out of my story it's the first one I've ever written and posted when I tried posting it though they shot me down for pour grammar and punctuation I've done my best to correct it but I need someone else to read it over so far I have four chapters completed and working on the 5th anyone who can help I'd appreciate it
I did my best out of my story it's the first one I've ever written and posted when I tried posting it though they shot me down for pour grammar and punctuation I've done my best to correct it but I need someone else to read it over so far I have four chapters completed and working on the 5th anyone who can help I'd appreciate it