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The story is about the cutie mark crusaders, who discover that they were artificially created by a scientist for their friends, the girls' parents, after they lost their biological daughters. The ingredients were the parents' blood, stem cells and a fragment of the Tree of Harmony, but because of their pet chimpanzee, Jojo, Chemical X added.

8 years later, around the beginning of season 5 of the show, before they got their cutie marks, they start to develop superpowers. Now, they must use them to protect the ones they care about while dealing with the fear they are beginning to create in common ponies.

I need help because I am Spanish, specifically from the Canary Islands, and I am writing the story thanks to the Google translator. Although I try to correct what I can, this is not my native language, so I know I will miss a lot of spelling mistakes. In addition, I would appreciate opinions and advice on how to carry the story. Thanks in advance.

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