Major overhauls are begging on my fic some that I never thought of before
a new editor that's helping me

Dreamless portal

go check him out
Has given me real constructive criticism of the smallest things that I've never thought about before but when actually put into words makes a lot of sense but hopefully all of that explains why I'm taking forever with this ah well it's a learning curve for all of us when we first started right....right.😂😶