Hello there, everypony!

Remember that emotional fanfiction I published not too long ago titled “Forgiven” starring Izzy and Misty? Well, it turns out that there is WAY more to the story than you initially thought. Behold my author’s edit! This version restores crucial character and story beats that were cut in favor of tighter pacing in the original, fleshes out motivations, and adds in additional material foreshadowing things to come! You can’t go wrong with the definitive version. Go ahead and check it out if you’re interested!

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