Hi everypony, I need some feedback on my new project "To Equestria And Beyond", I've put it on hiatus as of late as I want to build up my skills and I wanted to know from anyone who has read this story of mine what they think of it. I want as much collective feedback as possible as I want to improve this story by any means necessary, so please, comment any thoughts on what you think of the story and if you haven't read the story yet, take a look and come back with your thoughts.

NightFurySpeedy Out

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Put your story or the first few chapters up on Google docs.

Why?
For one, it's easier to find issues and reply to them.
Commenters can highlight areas with problems, and you can create a thread in that area.

Having folks read your story here, and picking out sentences is just more work.
Especially if you have questions.

I would suggest that you give folks comment rights not edit rights.
Only you should have edit rights. This is your story, and you should have the final say.

Make sure you get folks that focus on more than grammar and punctuation.
Even if you are very good with those two, your story could still tank.