I have now gone through every first draft and given my comments and criticisms. (Obviously excluding the people who failed to submit one or dropped out of the project.) Next Monday, on the 24th, I will be checking to see that people have started editing their chapters.

Obviously I don't expect people to act on my advice; you are free to ignore or accept any criticism you receive. But part of writing is iterative improvement through editing. I expect your chapter to receive some form of polish and adjustment, even if it has nothing to do with my comments.

This also includes myself. I already rewrote my Cadance chapter, and am going to try and act on the comments I received about my Luna chapter. This deadline is as much for me as for anyone.

If you have any questions or concerns about the criticism you received so far (from me or anyone else), don't be afraid to ask for clarification!