Summary Apple Bloom is hearing strange sounds and she decides to inspect it....and it's pretty strange.

The Cons The majority of this story just builds up to one main joke at the end. Sure, there's a couple fun moments that parody creepy pasta, but if you don't like the main joke there's not much this story can offer you. It doesn't help that a person probably has some idea of what the main joke is. Thankfully, I enjoyed the main joke. Wow, I've probably said written down 'main joke' so many times so far that I could probably make a game out of it!

The Pros This story has a couple of simple, yet great jokes filled throughout. The atmosphere (especially in the beginning) is described pretty well. That's especially great since atmosphere is probably one of the most important things about making a story like this. Overall, this is a pretty good story.

4944033 Thank you for the kind review. :)