Hi, I'm looking for reviews and feedback on my fic: A Better World

It's an adventure fic where the mane 6 travel to a parallel universe where their counterparts ruthlessly enforce Harmony by any means necessary, even killing. It's told from many viewpoints, mostly Twilight's and Starlight Glimmer's, and is set after the season 6 finale. I try to balance philosophy and emotion with action and adventure components. I also try to capture the personality and flaws of every character as accurately as possible.

Based on the Justice League Animated episode: A Better World

Thanks, and I really appreciate everyone's time.