Spectral Eclipse
[E][Alternate Universe][Mystery]

I would like someone mostly to help me with the descriptions and bounce off specific plot points in single chapters.

The story happens in an AU happening 6 years after Celestia is defeated by Nightmare Moon. However, even after those 6 years, there are insurgent groups against her rule. Now one week before the 6th Nox Eterna festival in Ponyville, Dusk Shine, pupil of Her Majesty Nightmare Moon, is assigned to aid the Lunar Inquisition finding a terrorist nicknamed as "Ghost".

Currently, only the chapter 1 (3k words) is published, but the chapter 2 is already written (4.6k words) waiting for an editor. I plan to release chapters at least once per month