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1. Story name: Under the Light of a Shooting Star

2. By: NorrisThePony

3. Suggested folders: Royal Alicorn Sisters

4. Summary: Celestia and Luna are stargazing together late at night, when Celestia points out a shooting star which makes Luna sad. Luna explains that shooting stars represent endings and that she doesn't like endings. Later the same night, Luna shows Celestia a star that she made to replace the star that died, and lets Celestia name it.

5. Why the story belongs here: It depicts Luna and Celestia sharing a close moment of sisterly bonding, in which they both learn a little bit about themselves. Both their alicorn powers and sisterly relationship are used to show them dealing with and moving past problems that even they cannot avoid. It explores a problem that Luna has that Celestia initially does not realize exists but swiftly learns of it's importance from her sister.

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7. Why it should not: While Celestia feels sympathy towards Luna, and while she expresses her regret, she cannot and does not directly contribute to helping Luna overcome her sorrow and instead helps by consoling her with words alone. Luna's banishment is mentioned but is not a significant part of the narrative.

8. Evidence: The mention of Luna's banishment occurs at around 2/3 of the story.

9. Additional notes:

Dancewithknives
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4049070 looks good. Moving.

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