I want to do something productive. And so, I've decided to try finishing up my piece "Blood Red Sapphires".

It was meant to be my very first clop story here on FimFic, but I never got around to finishing the thing. The third and final chapter was left half complete. However, I lost the notebook that held the rest of the chapter's contents, so the rest of the incomplete chapter is going to have to be made on the fly.

But I'm not sure of the build-up. This is clop/lemon, something I haven't written for...going on 4 years now. I think.

What I'm asking is; would anypony like to take a gander at what I have thus far in the unfinished third chapter? I'm looking for word/flow/punctuation corrections, if no one would mind. I had made a blog about this earlier, but a friend reminded me to try reaching out through group threads.

Any takers???