Hi there!

This doesn't seem to be a very active forum but I am going to make a post here anyway because the chance of getting noticed on the "Looking for editor" forum is equally as low.

So, now that I have bitched a little would anyone be willing to proofread my story, 'Uncrystallised'? It is a sad story about a filly who is found alone in a dungeon shortly after Sombra's defeat. Hundreds of crystal ponies remain uncrystallised but nopony knows why. The story is centered around the OC 'Krystal' and Twilight Sparkle.

There is slight gore in the story and is 7446 words long.

Act 1
Act 2
Final Act