http://www.fimfiction.net/story/86068/lone-wolfs-halo-mlp-fall-of-equestria

The title says it all;

Somehow I feel like there something I'm doing wrong after I post a chapter

and other times I'm worried that audience has no idea.

I've wanted to make this crossover structured similarly to Fallout:Equestria (Where its not people from universe A go and meet people from universe B; rather both universes are combined in a scene)

I'm too far into the story to go back and change names or take out a big plot twist. All I ask is feedback.