Thread for reviews of stories in the Action folder!

A review of "The End" by Shalrath.
This is more an adventure story, but there isn't a folder for that, so it's going here.
Here's the review.

Another review of a story that is an adventure story, but there's no adventure folder.
This one's called "a tale of the Sun, Moon and Stars"

737747 Thanks for both! I'll rename the folder Action & Adventure.