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I have been trying to come up with something from my story based off of EquineAvenger's story. When the Mane Six, Spike, Shining Armor, Cadence, Luna, and Celestia are banished from Equestria by Neighsay after he launched a rebellion in the aftermath of the school shutdown, they end up on Tamriel where they would appear in Windhelm and Young Six meets with them where they would be taken in by the Stormcloaks to see Ulfric and Galmar and tell them about what had happened. Ulfric and Galmar would start building up their armies and begin for their liberation of Equestria and makes alliances with the five leaders Neighsay insulted them. By the time they reached Equestria they move toward the sealed School where Twilight breaks the seal and reopens it. But then, Neighsay appears and tries to attack the allies, but then, Ulfric and Galmar appear in front of Neighsay where Ulfric deals with him in a duel. After a while, Neighsay is now lying injured and could not keep up. Ulfric unleashed his shout at him and then, as he did with Torygg before, he pierces Neighsays heart with his sword. After he brought the tyrant down, he, along with the Stormcloaks and the citizens of Equestria reinstates Celestia, Luna, and Cadence as rulers and have Equestria be part of Skyrim, and imprisons those who are supporters of Neighsay. A School Assembly is held at the Theater at the School and Ulfric blesses them with the blessings of the Nine Divines and gives them a speech to the citizens of Equetria.

Have you tried to come up with that?

.... Put the dragonborn in it (even as a cameo or mention) and i would read it....

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The whole idea is a broken mess. Just based on the fact this take's Neishsay's attitude way past racism and straight to high treason for no real reason. People seem to ignore that his attitude only extended to other races. Not ponies. Therefore, he has no backing, and no reason ponies would follow him.

So you REALLY need to come up with something that would make even some sense for this to even work. Or this is going to crash and burn as people point out the flaws that the author ignored.

Comment posted by Tiber Septim II deleted Apr 11th, 2020

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... I would still read it.....

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Unless Nox themself says that I need to stop, I won't take your threat seriously. It's called an opinion. I'm allowed to voice it. All I'm saying is that it could work if it was better planned out.

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