My displaced fic starts off at season one episode one and I need some help writing Zecora's lines, theres only gonna be a few, and most of them will be... pretty mature. Namely because of a Displaced character that no one has claim on, Donkey Kong, and his anthropomorphic nymphomanic world being visited by my displaced. The only line I have for her is severely lacking in what I want, so if anyone can make a suggestion or give me a better line, I'll credit you at the end of the chapter.

Thanks,
Gamer

4708349 Perhaps there is something that I can do
if you need some rhymes for you?

4708506 couldn't hurt to have someone go over them.
"I know many potions that I could brew, to soothe the trouble with your mini you" Vulgar, yes. What I need is a little vulgar.

4708523 "mini you" seems a bit out of character.
"I have potions that shall do good unto you and your stallionhood."
Is that close to what you mean?

4708627 Actually, that's damn well alot closer then anything I've came up with. May I?

4708632 Please do.

4708770 Thank you, you will be credited.

4709323 Any more lines to look at?