It's for the best, trust me on this... · 6:45pm Dec 9th, 2012
I just can't take it anymore- I love writing and I want to hit that novel mark of 40k words, but Blue Skies just feels like chains wrapped around my arms and legs.
I want to write it- but as soon as I try I feel like I'm running through a mud pit.
There are several reasons why, but the major is this
Purple Skies.
Blue Skies is probably the best thing I've ever written, and possibly will be- but it's starting to become malpractice because of what it's based off of
Purple Skies (I know some of you like it, but I just sort of don't)
The beginning to it was nice, I like how I opened it with sort of an intro to the characters
But this is what happened
I had nothing planned for it, at all
Everyday from school I just came home, raced to my laptop and started writing what I thought would make a good chapter for the day.
And the result? Characters that feel flat, 2D and shallow, so very shallow.
The plot was weak.
Allow me to summarize what Purple was
Twilight and Soarin' both feel lonley and want to find a boy/girlfriend. A festival pops up and they both go, Twilight looks at a very charismatic figure and like most love at first sight, saw a very handsome stallion.
Soarin' just looked out and picked a girl he thought looked nice
And then click, there they go.
They spent time together in the festival, the thought of Soarin' leaving once it's over imminent
Rd gets mad (of course)
Rd gets better, back to friends
Soarin crashes later, ruining his wings to where he can now stay with Twi
the end
I mean, it's not so terrible I hate it- I still like Purple but I feel like Stephen Myer right now.
Shallow romances about fake creatures that involve Twilight. (lol)
All that isn't to bad, but it's just terribly written and all of that goodness. and the fact it's love at first sight stumps me a bit too- but hey, it's what I wrote.
Here's the line:
I am not canceling Blue, nor am I rushing it's end.
I am not rushing it because the last time I did that (Applebloom's Vendetta) it cut the story in half, and I regretted doing it later because today I want to remake that story to make it great, so rushing it would only make things worse.
I'm not canceling it, just for the sake of me hating on giving up- and that I love Blue Skies dearly.
My ideas beckon me, old and new, but the chains of Blue restrict me and I have to break free for the sake of my Mistress that is writing.
I want to prove I'm a good writer, and I could give less shits about EqD, but I just want on there just to say I can.
Hiatus for now until I feel the need to write for Blue again.
I'm outdated... I'm from the times in which Fimfiction had no more than 5 thousand members, but now that it's beginning to overflow I need to pick up the pace and get rolling.
I hate being outdated.
I refuse to.
And so I hope I don't make anyone sad about stopping Blue for the moment.
But think of it like this- it's not too much of a difference... I've gotten like a chapter a month out or so for only 2-5k words, but I could write 10x that amount on something I really want to do.
Love you all
~Winter.
Expect even greater things from me.
If you need an editor- I'm very open to that
I believe my skills lie in editing really- but Writing is more fun.
I mean, it's not so terrible I hate it- I still like Purple but I feel like Stephen Myer right now.
I feel like Stephen Myer right now
Stephen Myer
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wut? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_rainbowderp_flip.png
Did I say something wrong?
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Nope. Perfect. Go around saying that. Tie camera to head.
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'tie camera to head'
I have no idea what that means, or what it's supposed to mean. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_sad.png
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It means tie a camera to your head while you go around saying that. So I can see what happens.
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Oh... Well that piece stays in this blog, I thought it was funny.
Hell, if I went around saying that to people irl, they would probably punch me in the face.
(I like the books, and the 2nd part of the last movie was good btw- it's just a running joke I guess)
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Never read nor watched them. Never plan to.
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dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
I wouldn't really recommend them anyway.
Well it seems you've discovered an common issue with romance fics, them getting together to fast. I'm not upset that you are stopping Blue Skies for the time being, get the ideas going and make a triumphant come back that is all I can ask for.
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Thanks
The only Twilight is Sparkle.
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Not a problem, just remember we can't afford to loose you too long. We've got what... two active writers doing Soralight?
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Have you heard of Manucci? He's a soarlight writer, he's pretty good. I gave him a hand on the first chapter to his new soarlight story
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Yes I have, he's a buddy of mine and I've been giving him some help as well. He's one of the two active writers, you being the other.
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oh
If you don't start off crappy, you'll never get better... or something like that. Just keep trying.
I liked Purple Skies but I agree with you and if its bothering you that much you could try rewriting it.
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'My ideas beckon me'-
I also want to write something else