A Simple Update · 2:53am Dec 7th, 2012
So for anyone wondering when the next chapter of Fragmented will be up, don't worry I'm 75% done. I want to apologize to everyone for the excessive lateness of this particular chapter, I've had a lot to do and, if that wasn't enough, I'm procrastinating bastard. Still, I don't want to leave you guys hanging too long, so here's a little spoiler for you guys (a little something you guys, for putting up with my inability to give you regular updates).
So, here it is:
“Ready to die?” Anger asked. Logic couldn’t respond, a hoof shoved against her larynx.
“Logic!”
Anger and Logic turned their attention to the castle, where Spike, the Elements, Shining Armor, Duncan, and more than a few guards bolted out. All of the new arrivals stared in horror at the scene in front of them: Celestia knocked out, the other fragments knocked aside, and Anger about to murder Logic. Before the Elements could do anything, the guards took up defensive positions around the civilians, ready to combat this threat. One pegasus mare guard was frozen however, unable to believe what she was seeing. Steadfast bolted out from the castle and ran to Creativity, helping her up.
“You okay?” Steadfast asked his master.
“I’m fine.” Creativity growled. The creative fragment looked at the scene before her, then down to Celestia. The mare grinned evilly. “Come on Steadfast, it’s time for all the pieces to fall into place.”
Over yonder where said action was taking place; Shining Armor stepped forth from the defensive guard position. “Stand down Anger, I know all about what’s been going on with you and the fragments! Surrender, and submit yourself to the guard!”
“In your fucking dreams asshole!” Anger yelled. “I’m going to kill Logic, then move on to all of you! Enjoy watching this bitch have her throat ripped out!” Anger looked to Logic and lifted her aura claw for the attack. “DIE LOGIC!” Anger’s claw made its descent.
“ANGER NO!!!”
Anger’s claw stopped millimeters from Logic’s throat. Logic thought that had she drank any liquids beforehand she’d probably had pissed them all out. Logic’s eyes shifted from Anger’s leg to the fragment’s face. Anger’s face was one of complete surprise. The fragment didn’t know the voice that had just called out; she had no clue. So why had she just stopped? Anger’s head twisted towards the source of the voice. Her eyes fell upon the pegasus mare guard who had been frozen with bewilderment seconds ago. Anger was dumbfounded looking at the form before her clad in armor. It looked as if Anger was going to cry, looking at the mare’s dazzling white coat, her amazing blue mane and her hazel eyes. The scar up her chest, hidden slightly by her armor, was of great interest.
Anger hopped off of Logic and began taking baby steps towards the mare. “M-Mute?”
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Lastly, for anyone that liked "The Fall of the King", I regret to inform you that it will go on hiatus until I complete "Fragmented". I already have a chapter in the works and as soon as I've completed "Fragmented" I'll focus on that.
Thank you all for your patience.
Called it!!!
Usually I'm okay with spoilers, but I'm gonna wait for this one.
Fall of the King looks to be not that popular. Three downvotes and no upvotes? Considering how much I'm enjoying Fragmented, that's surprising.