Nov
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2012
Luna again · 9:38pm Nov 29th, 2012
Hey guys! I just wanted to say I'm already done with chapter two, and I expect there to be four chapters. The first chapter is a little shorter, and the second is longer. The third will be a longer one too and the last will probably be short again. I started this three days ago, working on it maybe one-two hours a day. I'm already at about 3,000 words. Still expecting more too. It will probably be out in maybe three or four days, I'm not sure. I don't know how fast I can type.
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If you need a proofreader, you know who to ask!
I really want to read it, if you didn't take the hint.
I know, Just cuz I'm young doesn't mean I'm dumb.
Not that I'm angry about you wanting to read it 
Sorry, but I'll probably just proof read for errors myself. See if I'm repeating words or phrases to much, goof-ups on spelling, weird or fragment sentences, good plot, etc. You get the idea. I know what to look for.
I wasn't insinuating you're dumb. When I write, I force my sister to read it as she's pretty good at writing, far surpassing the both of us(Sorry!
), and she notices errors I hadn't even thought of. I understand your choice, I just feel it's always better to get a second opinion. I'm only slightly older than you, so I meant no insult. 
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Edit: New profile pic? Do you happen to have the source of the old one handy?
Hey, I was joking about the dumb thing. No hard feelings? How old is your sister? She should get an account!
I know I still have a LONG way to go with writing. I have a fairly limited vocabulary, and don't think to use things that would make the story longer of give it a little more voice. I need some practice, and I already signed up for a little class thing to help
Not sure if it will help too much, though.
Sorry, I don't have the source of the old pic. I only know that I searched it on Google and saved it to my desktop.
I'm too distracted to remember to find sources
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God, it's so hard to convey emotion through a keyboard.
Absolutely no hard feelings, that was meant to be lighthearted.
She's only a bit younger than I am. It's really annoying when I ask her to help me capture the personality of a particularly hard character, such as Pinkie, and she ends up writing the entire dialogue.
Ooh a writing class? I tried taking creative writing as an elective but it was full this year
Yeah, it is hard, which is why a bigger vocabulary would help me a lot with conveying emotion! It seems to work for some people though, because a couple of people have told me that they CRIED over my stories.
Is she like my age? I need some advice from her then
The writing class will NOT be my elective. We don't even have that in middle school! But it is somewhere outside of school, I can't remember what it's called though because it hasn't really started yet and I'm not sure when it will.
She's directly between us, she's 14.
And ANOTHER avatar change?
I was riddled with indecision, and the new one seemed foolish and brash. This one has much more elegance, character, form, and it fits my new story.
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I didn't chose the name Slender Dash because I was thinking of a slender form, but the pic kinda fits. I was actually tinkling of, well, Slender, the horror game that is ridiculously fun and heart-poundingly horrifying.
The Luna story!
i.chzbgr.com/completestore/12/4/24/xpcEq0XY3EqtE7hgAHL6MA2.png
What? The fancy words? Or the...slender form?
Jeez.
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Comment before that one, about the story!
And dear sweet Celestia that game is horrifying.