First Story Ever!

So I am trying to get more involved in the community and laid the groundwork for an idea I had to take MLP and have it crossover with Ultraman Nexus. I am waiting on the story to be approved at the moment, but hopefully it'll be well received by anyone interested. Check it out if you're interested and don't be afraid to comment, criticize, and/or critique in a constructive manner. Any flames or trolls will be blasted to the Meta Field by Nexus. Thanks and looking forward to this.
I will update this posted with the tagged story once it is approved.