Revising Part III · 8:09pm Feb 13th, 2012
Good evening, everyone! Or morning. Whatever it is there.
Well, I posted Part III the other day. In hindsight, it was a silly mistake. I finished writing it and editing it tired and in a hurry, which I should have known would result in a sub-par story. I have since gone back and totally re-done the last half of it. Now it's better, and makes more sense. So go back, read it again! Those of you who loved it the first time should find it better.
Re-writing the last half was an interesting process, as there was already a bunch of words there. I ended up recycling a lot of lines, just moving them around or changing who said them. In the process, Part III has become the longest of the series so far, at 5,138 words. Part I is 4,940, and Part II is only 3,976. Part IV is probably going to be the shortest, as I plan on focusing on the wedding, and not much else. But you never know, I could get carried away!
Thank you for reading, favoriting, watching, commenting, criticizing, and all the other things you people do.
