Update and Rewrites!

Hey guys! Just letting y'all know I'm still here. I was going back on the first few chapters, and I saw a lot of things that could be written better, especially in the first chapter. So before I get this next chapter out, I'm gonna go through all the other chapters and see if there's anything that I can do to change them and make them better. So for the next couple days, don't be surprised if you see any obvious changes to the other chapters. As for the next chapter, I'll probably have that out by next week, maybe earlier if I actually take my time to write it . Anyway, as always, thank you all for putting up with me, and hopefully these changes will make the story a bit more tolerable to read