Delays

News;
I won't be able to update Family Appreciation for a long time, I'm working on my first fiction which I wanna puplish it into a book. But I got help from that.
Two More Stories Involving Applejack
You read it right! As you can obviously see, AJ is my fave pony. :3
And I want an opinion on this; I've seen many bad OC stories but I wanna make a OC story too. That's the fiction I was talking about, originally it was suppose to be a My Little Pony story, but my partner was scared of the criticism here so we changed them into humans. Here are their descriptions;

Jackie Daniels, former Unicorn now an Earth Pony, (I know a human name, I can't change it I've grown attached to it) like Twilight, she studies all night, is a bookworm, genius at magic and academy but bad at social.
Her coat is yellow, she has freckles, golden eyes and red mane.

Summer Breeze, Pegasus, rebellious, rude and reckless and loves to race and video games, Jackie‘s legal guardian, fiery, hot-headed, tomboyish, is a typical trouble-maker, displays an immature sort of personality. She is decidedly stubborn and strong-willed, frequently letting her pettiness and vindictiveness get the better of her. She often gets into fights, but only to protect other people who are being bullied.
Coat is white, golden eyes and mane is black. She's the oldest of the sisters.

Please give me an honest opinion on this OC story, I really wanna try it out and see if it would fail or not.