100,000! · 9:13pm Oct 31st, 2012
100,000 words and finally some action!
To anypony who may still be watching... for whatever reason, thank you =)
Anyway, In chapter 7, there's quite a few references - in that a lot of lines from certain media is in. If anyone could give it a read and tell me where those lines are from, I'll give you four internets and much appreciation! =3
I don't know why I insist on writing a blog post for every new chapter, but in any sense, I think I always need to apologize for being either such a slow writer or for writing too much in a chapter.
So, guys, do I write slowly, or do I just put too much in a chapter... I mean it's quite rare to see five digits in one chapter of a story, even chapters more than 5000 words are quite uncommon... =)
Oh, yeah, it's Halloween today in little old England town! I haven't done much aside from watching creepypastas all day, which I wouldn't recommend to someone with a disobedient imagination.
Happy Nightmare Night, everypony! =P
First.
Now. I am very sorry for this, but i was put off of your story from the long rambling boring parts during the first 4 chapters, without any hooks to keep me reading. Hopefully this helps you, and i may come back and read this a while later.
465726 I know...
I don't like the first four chapters either; nothing really interesting at all happens as it's mostly setting the rest of the story up: the peripharus crystal, cantor's demon, the crew, the guns, twilight's foal... I suppose month-long intervals between chapters doesn't really help, either. 
There really isn't much action until WAY later on, so I'm not as proud of this story...
Ah, well... It starts getting better and better from here on, and thanks for the feedback =3
WHY CAN'T I FIND YOUR SEQUEL!?!?
If I could FIND your sequel(s), then I could provide my opinion. But...
*groan*
467942 Do you have the 'mature' filter disabled?
468727 I guess not. And where do I do that at?
468982 Oh, yeah... you don't have a computer, huh...
Well, I haven't seen what the site looks like on the PS3 browser, but if you hover over your name near the top of the screen, a little dropdown box appears with options like: 'edit account' and 'blog' etc... at the bottom, there will be a little unticked box marked 'view mature' Tick it, and you will be able to see stories labeled 'mature'.
At least, that's how it works for the computer, anyways...
469146 Yeah, there it is. Thank you!
Wow, how did I miss that...