Review For New Story · 10:54pm Aug 20th, 2018
Hello, everypony! So I have been writing a new story about Twilight. It's a little sad and depressing. Twilight creates a spell to save Equestria that sends her away for ten years. Then returns back to Equestria that is not the same. I was wondering if anyone would like to read it first to see if this is not a useless story.
Sure why not I’ll do it if no one else has
Sure I’ll enjoy it you can’t find many of these story at least in my opinion, and most are dead too
I’ll read it, all of your stories I have read have been great. I’d like to see how this one goes.
Sounds to me like there is an opening for 2 stories not just 1.
Or maybe a story inside a story.
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Sounds gpod either way
Seems good in my opinion.
There was some grammar mistakes but very few overall. Probably 15 at the most if I remember correctly
Good job