Important! · 11:09pm Mar 13th, 2018
Hey guys! Quick update, Dragon Ball Z Equestrian Adventures is NOT Dead. It is undergoing revamps. These revamps are due to the following:
1. I want to try and make things more original than just copy and pasting fight scenes from other media. That does not mean there won't be a reference here or there.
2. Fixing the pacing. I plan on extending chapters and making sure not to skim as much as I did.
3. Better consistency. I realize that the Kaioken is not something Goku would really use until later in the story when Super Kaioken is used.
Because of these, I need to change a few things with story, but not too terribly much.
Also, I want to make it abundantly clear, DON'T EXPECT FREQUENT UPLOADS. Yes, I will still write stories, but I have a bad habit of writing them and then putting them back down due to new ideas that come into my head and school along with gaming. Thank you for your patience.
Then you should consider changing a couple things in the previous story that didn't seem to make sense.
Firstly, ponies in Ponyville seemed unreasonably unfazed seeing an unknown being (unless sight of human is common in your Equestria), not shouting or screaming "Monster" something like that.
Secondly, Twilight's first reaction to unknown, strange creature was far from her normal quirks. Too calm. Instead of "What are you? I've never seen any being like you before? Can I test something on you?" etc.. And she didn't even ask Celestia how her mentor knew this being called Goku. She acted like she's known Goku for quite some time. Strange, if you ask me. (not to count her friends' reaction)
Thirdly, for an all-powerful Alicorn, Nightmare Moon resorted to Kaikoken way too quickly.
Lastly, I think Scootaloo learned Ki too easy it feels so unnatural. Goku and his comrades trained for months on basis alone and this pegasus filly did it within a couple minutes on her first try? Felt like insult to the concept of learning ki there.
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Thanks for the ideas! Definitely a big help!
Maybe on the episode when discord is being reformed, Goku could give him some mercy than explain to the mane 6 how he sense some good inside of him
Ponies in equestria don’t know what hands are.
You sure do a few changes in episode 3