Trying something New

Hey everyone, I know I haven't been updating the Five Nights story, I know. When I read the redo of the Five Nights book, it felt off to me. The Maine 7 going to the pizzeria to help a failing company, makes sense. They would want to help the old pizza joint. Mike Schmidt (Michael Afton) being there makes sense, he's trying to find his father. The thing that has been bothering me whenever I think about the story in my mind is this. Would Michael really want to have people looking into his life? Would he really be "Oh I just met these girls, now lets tell them everything about me and why I smell like a corpse." I doubt it. To me, Michael would be a very secretive person and I didn't portray that at all when I first wrote it. I'm deciding to do something differently. At least that's what I want, but that's sometimes not the case. I write something down and then I don't know what to do. Then I just give up and leave it there, so people can read an incomplete story. I want to try again. I'll revoke my submission of the Five Nights book, and hopefully by tomorrow, I'll have something new.