Which is Better? · 11:35pm Sep 17th, 2017
I've got a story much like the one on linked to below where it's mostly scripted with bits of the story told from a new characters' pov or tossed out and replaced with new bits of story. That's just how my writing has gone since I took it up. A lot can change that.
Which is why I'm typing/I've typed this blog.
I like that story but I've thought of an interesting way to change it. Instead of being about MY involvement in an epiusodes storyline make it more like a journal. I could write it like "Day1; apon waking I have discovered that I'm lost an a forest I do not recognize. My first priority should be survival, likely finding a terrestrial morph and utilizing it to get food, shelter and water."
Doing so would still allow for my view in situations without strongly going scripted. I'll also be able to condense chapters into passages though it would me a complete rewrite of the current story.
So for those of you reading this, it comes down to your opinion.
This: https://cimarronboy.deviantart.com/art/Bonus-Chapter-Improving-Performance-426942321
Or more journalistic: "Day1; apon waking I have discovered that I'm lost an a forest I do not recognize. My first priority should be survival, likely finding a terrestrial morph and utilizing it to get food, shelter and water."
Which do you think is the better option for writing the story?
