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TheThirdBomb


I spend far too much time playing BlazBlue. And Guilty Gear. And Dota. It's a wonder to me that i'm still able to get work done.

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  • 349 weeks
    Chapters you regret

    In my most recent chapter, I performed a rushed death of an underdeveloped character in an attempt to 'shake things up'.

    Don't do this. If you're comfortable with the pace your story is going at, and can set up conflicts for the future, then continue on that path.

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  • 349 weeks
    Unleashing my Stand: 「Shit Timezone」

    8 chapters that aren't exactly all that long, and i've already hit a problem with updating. Because my individual chapters can get done fairly quickly, one would assume that I could post them out quickly, too.

    Here's the thing.

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  • 349 weeks
    First Story, First Dislike.

    I knew what I was getting into, I really did. I had hoped, however, that my first endeavour would be met with feedback first, not a random dislike with no explanation as to why they felt they didn't enjoy my opening chapters.

    I am aware that crossovers are not for everyone, and i'm aware that anime is also not for everyone. It's still somewhat disappointing, nevertheless.

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24th
2017

Chapters you regret · 8:56pm Aug 24th, 2017

In my most recent chapter, I performed a rushed death of an underdeveloped character in an attempt to 'shake things up'.

Don't do this. If you're comfortable with the pace your story is going at, and can set up conflicts for the future, then continue on that path.

Do not simply assume that you can just unsubmit the chapter and exchange it with something else. It won't bring back the audience you already lost, and the readers that stayed through your regret will likely start to realise that you've stopped writing your own story, but have instead started writing specifically to please them.

While playing to your audience is always something to consider; you must also take into account that every reader is different. Every reader wants slightly different things from the stories they read. If you have made a bad decision, try the very best you can to remedy it in future chapters as I shall have to attempt to do. But at the very least, hold your integrity and take your mistake. Make it into something better.

You will not please everyone.

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Comments ( 2 )

It's good to see that you took the criticism by heart and use it to improve yourself. Learning from your mistakes is always a good thing.
If I can make a suggestion: if I understood you right, you write most as you go along and release chapters as fast as possible. Nobody's rushing you to release a chapter every 12 hours, so you could maybe write 1-3 chapters in advance before publishing to get a clearer picture where you want to take a situation and use it to tweak the chapters if necessary.

Good on you, the way I see it though people may have their criticisms and opinions the person you should ultimately be writing for is yourself, otherwise endlessly trying to appease everyone will lead to the mother of all burnouts.

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