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Oct
6th
2012

Updates to Legacy of the Alicorn: Part I · 6:58am Oct 6th, 2012

Hello everyone!
Thank you to those who liked my story and especially those who favorited it. I apologies for not working on this more then I should have , I have been very busy with work and writing an actual novel. I might have mentioned in my biography that this fan-fic is to test my skills in writing which is why it is in novel format and very long, so any constructive criticism with story would be very helpful!

Now Part I will be seeing an overhaul of the first seven chapters before the series is taken to EQD. The main points will be a clearer spacing and marking of brakes in the chapter as seen in chapter eight with the ***{Legacy}*** in place of just a single space or the picture it is suppose to represent. There will also be the title of the series at the bottom to show that it is the end of the chapter. I will also be editing the chapters adding in some things, making it match the other chapters, fixing so parts and changing the wording in others. The biggest chapter to be changed will most likely be chapter 5 (I messed up on that one sorry :/)

I will mention now that I only have a general idea about the entire series is so far (of the five parts only the first two are kinda planned out) for the most part I come up with the content of a chapter as I am writing it, and add that to part of the overall story which might also be the reasoning for it not being very well edited to which I apologies again, that's just how I write. I do hope that you can look past some of the grammatical and sentence structure errors and enjoy the story that lies underneath. If it is to much to bear then please leave me a comment in the chapter so that I can correct any mistakes that I might have missed. Thank you!

Keep an eye on the date markings to see when each chapter has been updated, i'm hoping to do this quickly so that the new chapters can be written and enjoyed! There might be about 5 more chapters left in Part I depending on what the next few chapters are like.

Thank you for all your support, and I hope this will lead to a successful Part I and a good start for the Legacy of the Alicorn series! I can't wait for Part II!

-Philosopony

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make that about 7 more chapters left in Part I instead of 5.

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