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Party with Pinkie Pie, accepted? I guess you could say, it was *sunglasses* easy as pie. YEAAAAAA! · 12:28am Feb 11th, 2012


First off let me thank you ,FimFiction, for giving me this chance to impress and inspire awe in my victims, I mean, readers. Here in this blog I plan on putting down, mostly, what I feel I should have done batter at, what I was planning on doing and why I changed it. I would also love to get feed back from my readers here or anywhere actually. You have some constructive criticism please, lay it on me.

The greatest party ever? Of all pony time?
This was supposed to be the grand intro, but after I read it a lot of things changed, I found myself drawing it out and I erased a lot of info to cut it short of fillers,. But when I posted it up I found that I felt like I took to much out. Will I go back and edit a few things in, prehaps but I am still happy with the way it came out. To the point and you get the idea, I hope.
Pinkie Pie has been given a huge responsibility and things go south. She blames herself for being irresponsible and her friends blame themselves for wasting time when they should have been more focused.
Originally I was going to do a council type deal for the zebras with Zekerail as the leader but instead I decided to drop this idea and just leave the fun loving guy in charge. Zekerail, was actually inspired by my long time friend Dell. Big guy who towers over most people, loves to have fun, loves kids, used to be a bouncer at one point I think. A leader through and through as well a source of constant wisdom when I can get it out of him.
Another Idea I had was a zebra got their stripes when they got their cutie marks, then for some reason I started to think of different colored zebras, the colored idea was quickly scraped but if you guys think the stripes idea is a fun little twist let me know.
I wanted the party scene to be bigger, much, much bigger but I felt that I was yet again just drawing out the story to tell a few minor details that did not matter. I also wanted this chapter to end differently but an idea came to me at the last moment so I cut it short, you'll see next chapter.
Alright every pony and zebra. I will see you again in two more weeks with another update, *puts on waffle house uniform* till then.
~Love and Peace~


Phenominal Cosmic Power, No Parties to Throw
Just begun to write it, should be up soon

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