Chains Chapter 1

Chapter 1: while the chapter did the job of introducing twilight her family and chains i feel that the author could have put more effort into explaining the human slave trade, mentioning if he was in a filthy or well maintained cage, whether or not the slave market was a grand festival like market with men loudly advertising or auctioning off humans to the highest bidder and explaining whether the humans have been slaves for a while, for example Twilight's mother could have mentioned that she had a slave when she was young. But i still managed to enjoy it.