New Equestria and the comic

Greetings!
I have finished ch. 1 of my first FiMFic called New Equestria, and I am working on ch. 2. (its still awaiting aproval almost 20 hours after I posted it)
in the mean time, I am also working on a comic based on the story over on my DA page: http://fav.me/db4i13i
about the story:
Warning: This story is far from canon
Main characters:
- Star Swirl the Bearded
- Twilight Sparkle
- (rest of the mane 6 and spike and Starlight)
- a character from Fate/Grand Order (TBA)
What is going on so far [WARNING: SPOILERS]:
Background:
Once upon a time, Equestria was overrun with monsters from another universe. After exhausting every other option to save the ponies of Equestria, the greatest wizards created two spells. The first spell to create a new Equestria and the other to translocate the ponies of Equestria to their new home. Unbeknownst to these great wizards, the old universe thrived in their absence, and even merged with smaller, corrupted, universes. Over many thousands of years, these brave wizards had been forgotten, and so also did the memory of the other world. But like all things that are in harmony, chaos eventually prevails.
Ch. 1:
Star Swirl re-creates the translocation spell that brought the ponies of Equestria to their new home; and thus ends up in what he will come to call 'New Equestria' even though it is technically 'Old Equestria'
Ch. 2:
//TODO